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OVERVIEW- PLEASE READ BEFORE USING THE 'GENTLE' CRITIQUE AREALight critique, carefully phrased suggestions for minor improvements to a poem. Using both positive and negative feedback. This feature... Started by poetrydancesLatest Reply |
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A Certain SymmetryGrandpa always wanted me to play an instrument; bought me a shiny new guitar said I would be the life of the party one day, but I packe... Started by Lynda G. Anaya |
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5 minutes ago Reply by poetrydances |
hungeryou look good enough to eat lying as you are, crosswise on the bed hair tousled on your pillow hands tucked under your cheek your soft fa... Started by kiwigirl |
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2 hours ago Reply by moniq bautista |
diaryOn the second day I thought God must have been listening. Who is this raining on my face in summer, making April smile upon me prematurel... Started by moniq bautista |
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2 hours ago Reply by moniq bautista |
Sorrow's companionignorance Her thoughts and feelings were not what you desired. Your pride, your life as you know it starts to smolder, embers slowly for... Started by Dave Coyle |
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6 hours ago Reply by Lynda G. Anaya |
The house on the hillAwaiting his return, as always she’s by the window. Her mother’s hand woven shawl, though aged, comforts her as does the warmth of the op... Started by Dave Coyle |
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Dec 3 Reply by Denise Haskell |
EIn the sand I follow doll size footprints mile after mile unable to raise my head my screams are stifled Helplessness, frustration muted... Started by Dave Coyle |
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Nov 30 Reply by Dave Coyle |
DivisionBags are tagged and wait by the door. A one way ticket tucked in your pocket. Distance will be the common denominator, as we lay the she... Started by ken de Jong |
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Nov 25 Reply by Janet Budd |
The First WeddingI recalled a girl, once my best friend She had a lovely face that was content. We were young about eight or nine When I asked if she woul... Started by Temsulong |
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Nov 25 Reply by Temsulong |
Her First TimeAs I lay upon the cool cotton sheets she came to me her eyes wide with excitement hands cupped in front of her ”this is my first time” sh... Started by ken de Jong |
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Nov 23 Reply by danna banaynal |
MontrealThat night in Montreal when I felt you become part of me, begin to grow inside of me. I kept my promise and on the balcony overlooking th... Started by ken de Jong |
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Nov 22 Reply by kiwigirl |
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