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OVERVIEW- PLEASE READ BEFORE USING THE BEAR PIT CRITIQUE AREAThis feature has been set up to allow you to receive critique on your poetry. It is up to other individual members however, as to whethe... Started by poetrydancesLatest Reply |
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Phantasms Holy KeepHave you ever seen a hearse go by? Thinking you’re the next to die, After the corner completes, his horrible deed, Make sure of your mort... Started by howard L. Kern |
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18 hours ago Reply by howard L. Kern |
The Night The Moon CriedWe sat on the rocks and made love, Alone in the mid night three weeks past, Nude, we fought like wrestlers without an audience but one, T... Started by Temsulong |
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Nov 28 Reply by poetrydances |
one nightONE NIGHT She crept into my house one night, Inserting herself like an entry wound. She fought off my tears, straightened my back, And s... Started by Tori Venti |
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Nov 20 Reply by howard L. Kern |
I've seen phantomsI’ve seen phantoms; heard them moan on a boat where I’m alone shadows when you see them make you lose your mind many men just walk in dr... Started by virgil maro |
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Titlelesshmm here is a random scribling for you, it doesn't even have a title yet (poor thing). It's been started and revisited several times, whi... Started by Jared Merz |
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Oct 15 Reply by Jared Merz |
the revealTHE REVEAL Soar forth brazen-winged dreamer, Hark the hallowed din of broken hopes. Hark the battle-ready soldier, Pull a trigger back i... Started by Tori Venti |
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Oct 13 Reply by Tori Venti |
master jackMASTER JACK Master Jack was old and grey; time had passed him by, Wizened hands betrayed his age, but a glint lay in his eye; Physique s... Started by Alf Hutchison |
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Sep 30 Reply by Alf Hutchison |
A New DayA New Day Through The Despair And The Darkness Of Loneliness This Scar Should Be Beyond Repair. Yet, Without Trying You Have Shown Me A... Started by Andy Quach |
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Sep 26 Reply by Patrycia |
Wake Up !Wake up! From your unyielding prestige That made you abortive And you turned into a nefarious sculpt. Wake up! From your morbid thoughts... Started by Sameer Ahmed |
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Sep 24 Reply by Cassandra |
Weep HolesWeep Holes by: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Don't take us for the wall itself For when the earthen plank behind the wall Gets soaked through We'll... Started by Naseer Ahmed Nasir |
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