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OVERVIEW-PLEASE READ BEFORE USING THE 'FIRM' CRITIQUE AREAFor firmer worded critique of a poem with suggestions for improvement- where careful phrasing is less important than the end result- i.e ... Started by poetrydancesLatest Reply |
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Don't Ever Come, O DecemberDon't Ever Come, O December By: Naseer Ahmed Nasir Look December Don't ever come now! Look, December Deserts unnumbered have expanded in... Started by Naseer Ahmed Nasir |
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1 day ago Reply by Naseer Ahmed Nasir |
The Spirit (for Naseer A. Nasir)Flicker down the mournful halls Of glaring ice, Flash onto Sirius or Aldebaran, Whatever; Unlatch pulsating gaols, Surround us with solac... Started by Yelena M. |
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Dec 2 Reply by Yelena M. |
The Soldier And The GirlShe was but just ten years old when he said hello She looked up to the uniformed man and smiled, She saw the brave man with a gun on his ... Started by Temsulong |
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Nov 30 Reply by Temsulong |
If jazz tried to speak bluegrassthis poem is very fresh i have not worked on it but a tad little bit. looking forward to comments. happy to be here. -joy If jazz trie... Started by joy |
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Nov 29 Reply by ken de Jong |
after the argumentIn anger a jailbreak of words stepped over one another, a mad scramble until emptied out. In pain they darted about in flocks and attemp... Started by moniq bautista |
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Nov 27 Reply by Cecelia Gay |
The Writer's CurseA precious few possess or can understand A servant to all souls who never walked on land This curse, my calling; my own mixed blessing I'... Started by John Lewis |
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Nov 22 Reply by Cecelia Gay |
'You are above all this, Naseer' [for my friend Naseer]You are the Sun Which can not be hidden By transient clouds Which do not last for long Purified by the flame of your poetry You are the ... Started by Angelina |
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Nov 21 Reply by Mamta Agarwal |
Time will tellTime will tell, The secrets of the dark. All unknown, That’s lurking in the Heart. Listen to the Tick, Of seconds on the Clock. Grains o... Started by John Lewis |
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Nov 21 Reply by John Lewis |
BrittleI was Brittle ancient glass. Envying the Willows, Who bow to Earth When the Tempest blows. But I was no willow. I wept at my false stren... Started by John Lewis |
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Nov 19 Reply by Rafael T. Luna III |
LEFT ME ALONELEFT ME ALONE The thief entered Found everyone slept Searched for money Touched a gold chain Tried pulling it slowly Struck in a photo h... Started by Deva |
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Nov 13 Reply by Deva |
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