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What a beautiful line,your eye cam `s resolution is too vast.
Amazing and lovely. My response to this poem echoes Cecelia's. Bravo!
-Cassandra
really great writing dear.....the greatness of the oceans should be ideal to all......thank you
Goodness....Don't know where this came from but I wanna go there. The brevity enhances the contrast. The Ah Ha moment is alive and well in your pen. Thanks....Cecelia
ephemeral
dew drops vaporize under warm gaze
perennial
oceans do not expose their bed
Wow, the only expression "crescent sun" began the work of my imagination. A beautiful haiku, Mamta, thanks for sharing. Yelena M.
Certainly a frame - The crescent sun and the clouds as much as stretch your eyes there is no ending of this poem....Thanks Mamta.
whew! what an intelligent write Mamta! you've got everyone going! :-)
Clouds forming teeth bite,
chew slowly part of twilight,
swallow part of dusk.
Thanks for the thought. regards Bob
Like the flavor of the images. Found myself thinking about the colors and how they would taste. Of course when you stick another form or count in my old brain wants to stretch too.
Enjoyed. Thanks Cecelia
Crescent sun, and clouds that bite. Big wow. Thanks.
wow mamta..i am always amazed with your haiku and senryu...you have a stunning imageryand word play!!! wish to have some tips from you how to make good haiku!!!
Clever drop of images here -gets the old brain going.
thanks Tony
chewing on slowly
crescent sun
bitten by the clouds
Hello Mamta. What a powerful poem. This was hard for me to read because of the violence of the theme, but the images are sharp and very dark. You asked earlier about whether you should change drift-/ing. I think it works either way. If drifting is s…
a goodbye done in an elegant poetry... it feels like not a goodbye at all... but still has deep meaning...
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pearls play pool -
pillowed pleasantries
paint petunias pink.
pillowed pleasantries
paint petunias pink.
Posted on September 23, 2009 at 2:25pm — 2 Comments
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- At 6:50pm on November 13, 2009,
poetrydances said…
- Hi
Apologies for the recent confusion. Hopefully this time it is ok!
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- At 2:37am on September 24, 2009,
Fenix9 said… - You rock.....
You rock. You rock. You rock.
- At 1:11pm on May 3, 2009,
Dianna R. Robeson said… - Thank you Mamta for becoming a friend. I thought your blog was amazing too. Thank you again for joining my blog. I hope you won't mind if I keep in touch and visit your blog. God Speed to you and yours.
- At 11:19am on April 17, 2009,
Cecelia Gay said…
- Thank you so much for your comment on my blog and becoming a follower. Forever Friends is and I think probably will always be my favorite. It is the "child" of my heart.
- At 10:24pm on April 15, 2009,
Cecelia Gay said…
- Thanks for your comment on My Darkness. My second attempt at free verse. Hoping you can teach an old dog new tricks. lol Maybe next Haiku. Cecelia
- At 9:05pm on March 1, 2009,
poetrydances said…
- Great page layout too- !! how much do you charge?
Tony
- At 9:47pm on February 28, 2009,
poetrydances said…
- Thanks Mamta !
great to see you here!
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